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Thursday 15 February 2018

I am learning to write Invitation


I added pictures and wrote when it will be happening and what will be there.
I learned to read family fun day on top and know what will be there on Thursday.
It was easy because we only had 15mins and finished.
Let me know if i should change something.
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  1. Anonymous15 March 2018 at 14:45

    Hi there, my name is Brooklyn and I am a student in Manukau at Waikowhai primary School. I really like how you also used pictures to explain your writing! . It made me think of when my school had a gala day it was really fun and lots of people performed on the big stage. Have you thought about using Less pictures and a little more writing? If you would like to see my learning, my class blog is http://wpsriceman.blogspot.co.nz.

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