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Showing posts with label writing. Show all posts
Showing posts with label writing. Show all posts

Monday, 26 November 2018

SLJ Paying it Forward

Paying It Forward If i could travel back in time in the 1930s i would give people better furniture to be more like at home then a rouged house or a better car and a little bit of money but i wouldn't just give all of those to 1 person i would help everybody out but if i can't then people can be more like me they could share some of there knew furniture and they could a house together like roommates but if people can't share they might not get knew furniture they might not get anything because if there one of those people who don't get knew stuff then they might not get a better future because if they don't talk nicely then they might not get anything but i want them to get a better future and be more like 2018 people sharing and being kind to each other but if you don't share then you can tell this to yourself, Sharing is careing and it will convince you to share and be more kind to others and they could get a better job, better clothes, paycheck and all kind of stuff.



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Friday, 21 September 2018

Narrative Draft + Narrative Plan



What I learned was me trying out new stuff and using speech marks and doing more and big paragraphs to do my work, but when you do your work you have to move away from other people who are annoying you.

I thought it was easy when my teacher told me what to do and she gave me an example to use things that i have never did before but when i went i thought to myself if this will be hard but i encouraged myself to challenge but i tried myself to never give up on something easy like this.

I thought it was hard doing all of this because i had to right all of though's paragraphs but paragraph 3 was the biggest paragraph out of them all but the rest was easy because the rest had an example for me to do them and do the right thing.

I was talking about what my character does if he is in a fight he found who did something with his family but i learned to do plans with groups in sentences and my character is 8 foot tall but if his legs get wrapped then sasuke ambush's people when they get distracted by Gaara after that they say team work makes the dream work.

When Gaara fights by himself he has to watch the others hiding from Gaara check out the plan to see what the rest of the sentences is or the rest of the plan so you can talk about it and you can probably make one like me tell your teacher if you can make one in your free time or you can draw a picture like my character Gaara.

Friday, 23 February 2018

Goals


It was easy cause we only had to do one thing on each slide.
I was learning to achieve my goals.
I liked how everyone can achieve there own goals

Thursday, 15 February 2018

I am learning to write Invitation


I added pictures and wrote when it will be happening and what will be there.
I learned to read family fun day on top and know what will be there on Thursday.
It was easy because we only had 15mins and finished.
Let me know if i should change something.

Tuesday, 27 June 2017

MATARIKI

I like poem's like this one. My friend helped me on this. He said it was not hard so he helped me because it was hard for me.